新东方名师：好作文是想出来的 不是背出来的

　　51.Directions

　　Write a letter to you university library，making suggestions for improving its service.

　　You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

　　Do not write the address. (10 points)

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I’m a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. I’m writing to tell some of my ideas，which I hope to be helpful for you. (第一段写的还不错，而且加入了身份的介绍，同时写出了题目要求---建议，且带有定语从句)

　　I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date(过期). It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore(逻辑连贯)，since we have a huge number of books，it is not easy to find the right one easily. However，if we can introduce some new searching means(引进新的搜索方式，比较好的思路， 如果按湘湘讲的写可以说书太多找起来不方便，带来的坏影响就是太浪费时间)，such as implementing new information management system that would be useful. (他没有写服务，其实就写了两点建议)

　　Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I’m looking forward to seeing some new changes soon. (模板语言)

　　Sincerely Yours，

　　Li Ming

　　2006年考研小作文

　　51.Directions

　　You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned，asking them to help find a candidate

　　You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

　　Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.

　　Do not write the address. (10 points)

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　As a college student who is studying and living in a good environment，I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long time，I write this letter to request your help to recommend a proper candidate. (开头太长，不过语言很好，而且有身份介绍，同时说出了很清晰的目的，但是不建议基础不好的同学模仿)

　　I wonder if it is convenient for you if three things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First，the child should come from Gansu Province，for I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second，it will be better if the child is a primary school student. I hope I will help him/her from the very beginning. In addition，he/she must be willing to return to his hometown to help built it after graduation from university.(注意看其中的内容，词汇没有任何特殊之处，基本全部是初高中词汇，就是搭配的比较好，且没有任何的错误)

　　My plan will be carried out as follows. On one hand，I will remit at least 2,000 Yuan in cash every year until he/she finishes his/her education before entering college. On the other hand，I decide to teach the child一 math and English in person during my summer vacation，which will surely be more beneficial to the child. (这个段落作者依然是在使用自己最会用的句式结构，但大家无论如何要尽量使用定语从句!!!!而词汇他只用了几个他会的难词，所以大家记得，句式简单词汇难，词汇简单句式难是你可以二选一的方式，如果做不到，那就保证少出错，哪怕简单.)

　　Your prompt help would be highly appreciated. And I am looking forward to your reply very soon.(模板!!)

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Ming

　　2005年考研小作文题目

　　51.Directions:

　　Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions，But n5ow you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss，Mr. Wang，telling him your decision，stating your reason (s)，and making an apology.

　　Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

　　Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.

　　You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

　　Dear Mr. Wang，

　　First of all，please allow me to express my deep sorry to you for my resignation(目的词). I do know that this will bring about much trouble to you so that I write to you for my explanation.

　　I decided to quit for some reasons as follows.(理由) To begin with，the job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions is not suitable to me. What’s more，I am preparing for another degree and I prefer to further my study. Again，I apologize for my resignation to you! (这个范文的中间段写的之烂不评价了，没什么内容，当然它具备唯一一个它具备的优点，那就是没出错.....)

　　I am looking forward to your early reply. (模板太烂!!!!更好的句式比如说 i will be right here to wait for your early approval and once agian feel deeply sorry for the inconvenience my resignation has cause to you.

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Ming