2009年6月英语六级考前热点高分范文(九)

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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What does Modern Science Bring us? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

　　1)科学究竟带给我们什么?这个问题一直备受争议

　　2)很多人认为科学带来了很多问题，比如污染、核武器

　　3)你对此的看法是…

　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?

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　　行文思路

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个有争议的话题，提纲第2点针对该话题提出一种反面观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出关于科学的争议，简单阐述科学带来的问题;表明“我”对科学的正面看法，阐述科学带给我们的好处;得出结论：科学发展利大于弊。

　　高分范文

　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?

　　The question “What does modern science bring us?” has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.

　　[3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]What’s more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.

　　[3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings’ misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.

　　【亮点点评】

　　[1]“引起极大的争议”。

　　[2]“对…负责，是…的原因”。