2008年12月英语六级考试写作中的词汇升级

　　在改写完成之后，整篇文章的最后形状是这样的：

　　Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

　　Currently, the issue that should man look forward to being rewarded when conducting a good deed is being drastically debated in public.

　　Some people defend that it deserves to be rewarded after a good deed has been done in that they believe that contemporary society has increasingly converted to “money worship” community. Now that expending time, dedicating effort, or even consuming money in doing good deeds, correspondently, it is appropriate to acquire rewards.

　　In spite of above-mentioned statements, the majority still consent that it is dispensable to reward people of doing good. Take Mr. Leifeng as an example, he spent his whole frugal life in aiding and assisting others without any return. Up to the present, people commemorate him in every 5th March. He declined rewards and awards but achieved regards and respects. Therefore, doing good deeds should be based on one’s beautiful mind, which is a sort of virtue out of self-consciousness. Meanwhile, doing good deeds incarnates man’s social liabilities and obligations.

　　Weighing the pros and cons, I am inclined to approve the latter viewpoint. Although reward accepting can hardly be accounted for a blunder, I still deem that doing good deeds without reward should be consistently a favorable custom in the country. I hold this truth as self-evident that ask not what others do for you, ask what you do for others.

　　文章进行词汇升级之前，最多在考官的面前能够拿到9分，但是经过细致的升级和改革之后，本文在实际考试中的打分至少可以得到14分。当然文章可以做得更好，但是需要的是大家能够脱离既定的模版进行写作，否则进行无数次的词汇升级，哪怕是把单词上升到GRE考试的高度上，写出来的文章也不能做到有血有肉。在这样一个写作模版流行的时代，我更希望同学们能够记住一个我自己创造的单词：demodelization。我解释的意思就是去模版化。模版不能说没有用，它在我们考试的时候帮助我们节省了宝贵的时间去思考文章的核心，只要往里面进行拼凑就可以了。可是却丧失了达到作文考察的根本目的：对于已经获取知识的合理运用。因此我们在写作文的时候，第一个考虑的就是将自己所写的文章进行词汇的但方面升级，另外一点就是应该让自己的文章尽量脱离模版来完成。模版不是万能，单词也不是万能，合理的利用所学知识才是永远的万能。

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